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Pain

Amanda K lessig (Sunshine) 1987

Give me an ounce of pain and watch me run
My soul can disappear faster then the rays of the sun
From pain I could hide all the days of my life
For my children however I will put up the fight
This lover will find the warrior inside
God knows in him I confide
The worst feeling is hurting
The worst hurt comes from your heart
Your body panics
Your soul aches
Then your mind breaks
Now it is time to stand against the hate
Time to be bold against the snakes
It is time to feel my pain
Embrace my rain

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Written on 2022

Submitted by amandak on May 21, 2024

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Scheme AAXXBBCXXDDXDEE CX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 511
Words 106
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 2
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4 Comments
  • Wbrooks431
    Wbrooks431
    You seem to be a fair and understandably woman. Give things time to fall in place and you will be truly loved.
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • Wbrooks431
    Wbrooks431
    Keep moving on and let nothing get in your way for your love is wanted and needed.
    LikeReply 111 days ago
  • Wbrooks431
    Wbrooks431
    Do not let pain destroy your ambitions. You. will win the fight. One day you will find the right lover. Just Pray.
    LikeReply 112 days ago
    • amandak
      amandak
      You are correct, never let the pain destroy. Feel it and let it go. To me it's deeper then a lover, this is about loving herself
      LikeReply11 days ago
  • Abbykesington
    Abbykesington
    This is a very nice work. I pray you remain steadfast in "standing against the hate."
    LikeReply12 days ago
    • amandak
      amandak
      Thank you, prayers are greatly appreciated
      LikeReply 112 days ago

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