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I am a woman

Marieta Trifonova Dechevska 1985 (Sofia)

Slow down ,slow down!
I am a woman.
Stay calm ,
of my 5 minutese more -
to go to for a cafe to the store.
Stay quet for my make up -
,,I know I am better when I wake up,,
I am a woman with every step and rhyme.
Yes I love you all the time ,
even when I am in front of the mirror-
with no clothes ,
I love you when dreaming on my pillow
I love you even when I write secret love notes.
But I am a woman with my weakness and strenght.
Read my notes ,dear ,by sence ,not due to length!

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Submitted by lysia on May 16, 2024

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Scheme ABCDDEEFFGHIJKL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 482
Words 117
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
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2 Comments
  • JdeLorenzo08
    JdeLorenzo08
    Deep, very deep, beautiful poem!
    LikeReply15 days ago
    • lysia
      lysia
      Thank you!
      LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and empowering poem! Your words truly celebrate the strength and beauty of being a woman. Your passion and love for yourself and others shines through in every line. I especially love the line "I know I am better when I wake up" - it's a powerful reminder of self-love and confidence.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to focus on the flow and structure of the poem. Consider playing with the rhythm and structure to enhance the overall impact of your message. Additionally, adding more sensory details could make the poem even more vivid and engaging for the reader.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful celebration of womanhood. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world!     
    LikeReply15 days ago

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