Life After Death



Life after death.
This is something I’ve had to accept.

I know you think of me.
You heard me weep.

You heard me in heaven above.
So You sent me your grandson.

I wished for a little piece of you.
You sent me a reminder of you.

My consolation to a heart that’s been
broken.
I promise to give this new baby my devotion.

I promise to watch over him.
The cycle of life has not been broken .
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Written on August 26, 2022

Submitted by LatinX on May 12, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX XA BB XAA XA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 396
Words 95
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2

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  • Symmetry60
    Having watched my brother suffer the loss of his 6-month-old son, Cameron, and, years later, the loss of his 34-year-old daughter, Kori, this piece brought tears to my eyes. Sometimes a work is its own reward. I can add little that will do this justice. I feel you in every word...e-v-e-r-y word. I see you.... 
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    • LatinX
      my so sorry for you and your mother’s losses. My nephew I raised like a son. I don’t know how I’m still standing. I have so many poems about my grieving. I have an entire collection.
      LikeReply7 days ago
    • Symmetry60
      Imagine that we're blessed with an outlet like this, Deb. What I'd be without writing and poetry I can't say. What I can say is that poetry is so damn medicinal that it keeps me humble, rounded and grounded in who I was, who I am and who I aspire to be. It also reminds me of who I wasn't, who I'm not and who I refuse to be based on the aforementioned. 
      LikeReply 17 days ago
    • LatinX
      I have poem about how my writing heals me. If I didn’t have the ability to write I’d be lost. I believe the poem is called this is the way I mourn.
      LikeReply7 days ago
    • Symmetry60
      To take it a step further - imagine that your writing, your thoughts, your mistakes, your pain, your journey, etc have the power to heal others as well. We walk around wondering what our purpose is when, all the while, our very lives stand before us screaming "I AM THE PURPOSE!!!" Never underestimate the value of your life, Deb. Every step forward and backward is a lesson for everyone who's stammered through this life broken. Just these exchanges alone are helping to heal broken bits of me as we speak. This is purpose right here. 
      LikeReply 17 days ago
    • LatinX
      love your words Stephen you’re poetic and deep in simple conversation. That’s why you write like you do. One thing I’ve always said. Poets have one thing in common. That’s pain.
      LikeReply 17 days ago
    • Symmetry60
      Anything you glean from my words has been provided by way of yours. Turns out wisdom is pretty circular in nature, eh? Group hug. ;-)
      LikeReply7 days ago
    • LatinX
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    • LatinX
      hugs…
      LikeReply 17 days ago

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