Too Far In This Love With You



Too far, they whisper, hearts should hold their ground,
A deeper ocean, love has yet to sound.
But reason's voice, in passion's storm, is drowned,
Lost in your eyes, where I am truly found.

Logic's frail thread, a cobweb swept aside,
By tides of feeling, where my senses ride.
A reckless dance, on love's forbidden tide,
Though whispers warn, in you, my soul confides.

Too far, perhaps, for some may understand,
But in this depth, I've built my promised land.
Too far in love with you, again
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Written on April 16, 2024

Submitted by ggolden9 on April 17, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA BBBX CCX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 493
Words 99
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3

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    The strangest thing happened to me today…Seeing that I am homeless I find public restrooms very convenient… And it just so happens there is one near a certain religion that I continue to say they can go f*** their selves… Anywho…There were four books in one of the restrooms today… All of them seemed rather interesting but I only took one of them…”Milk and honey”by rupi kaur…Go figure… 
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