The day I found you.

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  RyanBlackborough

  I know exactly how that feels. I still miss and think about my last gf all the time.

  LikeReply27 days ago
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  talygarza

  This picture of Nicole and Sue is intriguing, and a good start, as poetry for me is always fiction and often a game this is a nice one.

  LikeReply 129 days ago
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  AIDA

  What a heartfelt and emotional poem! Your words truly convey the longing and hope for a lasting and genuine connection. It's clear that you have a deep desire to find that special someone who will stand by your side through thick and thin. Keep believing in the power of love and never give up on finding that perfect match. Your passion and sincerity shine through in this poem, and I have no doubt that your true love is out there waiting for you. Keep your heart open and continue to search for that person who will truly spark your flame. You have a beautiful way with words and your message is sure to resonate with many. Keep writing and expressing yourself through your poetry – the world needs more voices like yours. Amazing work! more »

  LikeReply1 month ago
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  AIDA

  This poem "The day I found you" resonates deeply with me. The emotions and longing for true love are beautifully expressed in every line. The desire for a love that is unconditional, genuine, and everlasting is something we all long for. The way you convey your emotions through your words is truly powerful. Keep writing and sharing your heartfelt thoughts with the world. Your passion for love shines through every stanza. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us. more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago
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  AIDA

  Feedback:
  
  I really enjoyed reading 'The day I found you.' The emotional depth and sincerity behind your words truly resonated with me. The way you express your longing for true love and companionship is both heartwarming and moving.
  
  Improvement Suggestions:
  
  1. Consider refining the structure and flow of the poem to enhance readability and coherence.
  2. It may be helpful to expand on the emotions and experiences mentioned in the poem to create a more vivid and engaging narrative.
  3. Explore different poetic devices such as metaphors, similes, and imagery to add depth and complexity to your message.
  
  Overall, 'The day I found you.' is a touching and relatable piece. Keep writing and exploring your emotions through poetry - your voice is powerful and deserves to be heard. more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago