Commitment



The stars that were there startling countless in number, pervading the mind river. Thou took them aside one by one- at thine pleasure.
When the mind was wrought an all-losing star – like a discoloured roofing by far, then my bewildered mind called up that thou wert committed to the time for the treaty to get over. Thou ensured thou will fill up my mind sky with all stars ever
Once my mind will be emptied all over.
Today is the final day , so keep thy promise, time urges very strict
 as it’s hands are tied .
Hey lord; delay not any longer, delay not any longer.
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Submitted by amal_k on March 27, 2024

Modified by amal_k on March 28, 2024

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Words 110
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