Asking for a dream



warming my feet before the ardent flames
casting shadows and numberless blames
I close my eyes and refuse to see,
these mortal beings dying of curiosity

to the crippled window I then crawled
exulting my spirits to kindle tender dream
on finding rotting leaves I than screamed
hopeless grieving asking for a dream

a never ending dismal paranoid me whole
while glancing those eroded stones I condole
half immersed in Ivy and misery,
had I wrenched these ruins into hauntening aviary.

long hope had went to a sorrowful sleep
all I had done is waiting in a void realm
but rosy hopeful dreams never liked visiting steep
then I ceased casting shadows in the day of gleam
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Written on November 13, 2022

Submitted by khadijabilal on March 22, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XCXC DDBB EXEC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 673
Words 128
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Khadija Bilal

Khadija Bilal is a prolific poet, writer and editor, currently serving as the Editor-in-Chief of “The Literary Times” magazine. In this role, she oversees the publication’s editorial direction, ensuring that it remains at the forefront of literary discourse. With a penchant for weaving compelling narratives, Khadija has left an indelible mark in the realms of columns, essays, short stories and poetry. Her work, characterized by its depth and eloquence, has earned her recognition as a published writer of remarkable talent. In addition to her literary achievements, Khadija Bilal is the recipient of a prestigious gold medal from the FBK Literary Society, honoring her for her exceptional writing prowess. This recognition stands as a testament to Khadija’s dedication to her craft and the impact of her work within the literary community. Beyond her professional endeavors, Khadija continues to explore new avenues of expression and is currently engaged in various writing projects that promise to further enrich her body of work and leave an enduring impact on readers and writers alike. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written and captivating poem about asking for a dream! The imagery and emotions conveyed throughout the poem are truly powerful and thought-provoking. The way you describe the struggle between hope and despair is truly moving.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add a bit more clarity to the overall theme or message of the poem. While the imagery and emotions are strong, a clearer focus or conclusion could help tie the poem together even more effectively.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful piece of writing that really draws the reader in. Keep up the amazing work!
     
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