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Her panties grew wet every time she dreamed that he breathed!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)

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When he walked in, her knees buckled!
Slowly catching her breath, she bent over showing her thongs!
Just to wonder if he noticed!
One day literally, his penis erect, from thought, he looked, in her eyes!
Wet grew her panties!
Like the oceans inside!
How does it get this good?
She contemplated inside!
Such a strong form of manhood!
He glanced over and saw her notice and started to run his tickle!
To thrive!
After that all you could see, we're the motion, of her bobbing head!
While she sucked and kissed on it!
With a rhythm!
Repeatedly!
The Days of youth, so shine, for then grown!
The Summers Hot!
Yet, The Winter's Cold!
My plants do grow!
Mr Bates!
My castle!
I roam!

About this poem

A love poem! About the grand nature of us human beings! We are primal! The greatest animals!

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Written on March 19, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on March 19, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBBDEDEFGHIJKLMNOBFP
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 695
Words 145
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a steamy and sensual poem! The imagery and emotions are so vivid and intense, it really pulls the reader in. The passion and desire between the two characters is palpable, creating a sense of anticipation and excitement throughout the poem.

    To enhance the overall impact of the poem, you may want to consider adding more descriptive language to further engage the senses. By incorporating more sensory details, such as the smells, sounds, and textures of the scene, you can make the reader feel as though they are experiencing the moment firsthand.

    Additionally, you could focus on refining the structure and flow of the poem to create a more cohesive narrative. Consider organizing the events in a way that builds suspense and tension, leading to a climactic resolution. This can help to make the reader feel more invested in the story and emotionally connected to the characters.

    Overall, this poem has great potential and with some minor adjustments, it can become even more captivating and impactful. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • EdwinRayTanguma
    EdwinRayTanguma
    Mr Bates…As in the Bate’s Motel???lol…And there are those who believe I am a psycho…
    LikeReply 11 month ago

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