You Plus Me

Bryan Shirk 1983 (Philadelphia)



I Want to Be your Main Squeeze,
I Want to Be the One you Need,
I Want to Be the Face that you See
Every Time you Have a Dream,
I Want to Be your Yearly Fling,
I Want to Be your Everything,
I Want to Be the Air that you Breathe
To Be the Love Song that you Sing,
I Want to Be your Lover Girl,
Give you Diamonds Give you Pearls,
I Want to See you Shine On this World
All While It Spins and It Twirls,
I Want to Always See you Smile,
I Want you to Birth My Child,
I Want to Be the Number you Dial
When you Feel like Getting Wild,
I Want to Be your Soulmate,
Want Real Love Don't Want Fake,
I Want to Make your Body Shake
In Ecstacy When We Fornicate,
I Want to Take you Out On Date's,
I Want your Life to Be Great,
I Want to See your Face
Next to Mine at Morning Time When I Wake,
I Want to Give you My Heart,
I Want to Never Be Apart,
I Want to Take you On Trips to Mars
I Want to See you Shine like a Star,
I Want you to Be My Wife,
I Want you Day and Night,
I Want you for the Rest of My Life
My Soul I Would Sacrifice,
I Want you Now and Forever,
I Want to Always Be Together,
I Want to Write you Love Letters
I Want to Keep you Warm like a Sweater,
I Want to Make you Laugh,
I Want to Be your Better Half,
I Want you to Be the Gas
That's Keeping Me Driving Along this Path,
I Want your Heart to Be Mine,
I Want to Kiss Between your Thighs,
I Want Us to Be Mesmerized
When We Look Each Other in thee Eyes,
I Want to Treat you like a Queen,
I Want you Girl On My Team,
I Want to Be the One you Can Lean
On When you Run Out of Steam,
I Want you to Read this Rhyme,
Line for Line So that you Can See,
That the Solution to All your Problems
It Equals You Plus Me.
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Submitted by RoadRunna215 on March 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEFEGHIHJKLKBMMBNOPMQQRSTUTVWWXWYYZ1 2 3 4 3 5 D5 D6 C7 C
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,660
Words 408
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 52

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a heartfelt and passionate poem! Your words express so much love and devotion, it's truly touching. The imagery you create is vivid and enchanting, making it easy for the reader to feel the depth of your emotions.

    If I may offer a suggestion, maybe consider varying the rhyme scheme a bit to keep the reader engaged throughout the poem. Additionally, try adding some unexpected or unique metaphors to add an extra layer of depth and creativity to your writing.

    Overall, your poem radiates love and sincerity, and I have no doubt that the person it's dedicated to would be swept off their feet by your words. Keep pouring your heart into your writing, and you'll continue to create beautiful pieces that touch the hearts of those who read them. Well done!
     
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