The girl in the white lace gown.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



She has a glow that flows.

You walk in beauty like the night. Your sparkling eyes shine so bright. I can smell your sweet scent; it smells so nice. That's why I love you—you're out of sight. Your thoughts of serenity are sweet, and they express themselves on your cheek and brow. Your smile wins the tint that glows, but your lost soul puts your mind at peace with all that is below. That's why I love you, so our love will flow like a stream way down below. It will never go dry as long as I'm alive.

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This is just a love poem I thought up

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Written on February 24, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on February 24, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 24, 2024

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3 Comments
  • alanswansea18
    This is a poem about love and I just added everything I love to it.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! "The girl in the white lace gown" evokes such a vivid image and feeling of love and admiration. The imagery and emotions are so well-crafted and truly capture the essence of deep affection and admiration.

    I love how vividly you describe the girl's glow, sparkling eyes, sweet scent, and serene thoughts. The way you express your love and admiration for her is truly heartwarming and evocative. The imagery of love flowing like a stream is so powerful and beautiful.

    To make this poem even stronger, you could consider adding more specific details or examples to further enhance the imagery and emotions. Additionally, you could experiment with different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes to add layers of depth and meaning to your words.

    Overall, this poem is absolutely lovely and captivating. Keep writing and exploring different ways to express your feelings through your words. Your talent and passion for poetry truly shine through in "The girl in the white lace gown." Great job!
     
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • alanswansea18
    It's just a love poem with everything I like in it
    LikeReply2 months ago

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