Astral Sleep



Strange sleep in a childlike mind sway
and is drifted into the daze in the pull of astral play.

Thereafter countless a rotation has occurred but the particles are still in same swing for the span of time known no way,
The helpless clock time sounds tik- tik-tik even till today.

Suddenly for a while I came out of the daze due to the storm from the far away,
And saw other's beard has turned grey,
and countless illusion has stored in their mind sway.
I feared lest it might fall on me
and again went into daze without delay.
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Submitted by amal_k on February 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA AA AAAXA
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 530
Words 109
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 5

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