She stopped my tears



She stopped my tears
In a corner of the room
Silently, fixing my hair
Under the murmurs of the clock,
She could hear my breathing.

Then, I saw her smile
Pure as the moon.
Her hands came closer to my cheek
My mother laughed at me

A smile, how did she do it?
A smile, a heavy tear did dry
The tear that flowed like a river
How could she stop it?

That sweet smell
It gave me the whole world
I didn't even realize it
How did she stop my tears?

About this poem

This is a very emotional and personal poem. It is a gift for my mom's birthday. I wrote it in a very hard period of my life when the only supporter of mine was her. She stopped my tears and healed my soul. It is a reminder for everyone to go and hug their mom saying "I love you so much"

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Written on September 13, 2023

Submitted by klea.k on January 27, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXX XXXX BXXB XXBA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 442
Words 100
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4

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