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My longe vol van jou

Morne 2005 (Potchefstroom)

Free verse
My longe brand,
My are is rooi,
In my longe, jy is
Deur my are. Jy vloei

In my, deur my en om my is jy,oorals om my en ek soek steeds meer
Soos n verdrinkende enkeling smag na suurstof
Ek is onder al jou asem rowende molekules
Ek probeer uit ruik na jou suurstof maar jou asem stol om my
Ek gaan verlore raak in jou gees deur sy vensters en daar is geen suurstof

In jou oe is waar ek wil verdwaal.

About this poem

A boy who is in love with this girl And he writes to her how he experiences his time with her and how she took away his breath And he also explained how he feels when he look into her eyes

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Written on January 20, 2024

Submitted by oosthuizenmorne046 on January 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABC ADBXD C
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 400
Words 89
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 1
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