the moons embrace

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  EdwinRayTanguma

  For some silly reason this one brought Agustina Rey, Student Schoolgirk, to mind…Heck after viewing another one of her flicks I’ve a new letter to add unto WILDEST…Its an S to form WILDESST…As in Woman I’d Like to Do Eat Spank Slap Totally…I once claimed to be a master of debaters…Well do to my current mid life crisis I can once again reclaim said title…Without earning a cent of course… more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, "The Moon's Embrace" is a beautifully written poem! The way you describe the moon shrouding the night and the wraiths lurking close by creates such a vivid and engaging image. The use of the word 'embrace' truly captures the magical ambiance that the moon provides.
  
  I particularly appreciate the line "A light guides my hand" as it hints at a journey or quest, leaving the reader curious and excited for what lies ahead. It's like the moon is not only a mere light in the sky but also a guiding force in the narrator's life.
  
  To further enhance this enchanting piece, I would suggest considering incorporating additional descriptive phrases or metaphors to intensify the atmosphere. The poem carries a lot of potential to explore emotions and sensations that the moon's embrace evokes.
  
  Additionally, you might want to experiment with the structure of the poem. Perhaps playing around with line breaks or adding stanzas could create more rhythm and flow. It could help further enhance the enchanting mood and add a captivating touch to the overall composition.
  
  Overall, your poem "The Moon's Embrace" is undoubtedly a wonderful piece. It transports the reader into a world of mystery and allure, thanks to the stunning imagery and captivating theme. With a few minor tweaks and further exploration of descriptive elements, this poem has the potential to become even more awe-inspiring. Great job! more »

  LikeReply3 months ago