Where Is This Land

Dianne L Holden 1949 (Louisiana)



Where is this land known as freedom
They say it begins on the western shore
Upon approaching this promised land stands a colossal woman with torch in hand
Immigrants are welcomed by her lighted lure
The seven points upon her crown represent the freedom on this ground
The amber torch held in hand reinforces this promised land
After exploring this glorious place, all are left with a feeling of disgrace
One will agree, where is the freedom promised me
Turmoil, controversy, inhumanity--is this called freedom beyond the western sea
This land called freedom can only be a deserted island in an unknown sea

About this poem

The poem is about freedoms and promises in a glorious land that does not meet up to the standards of complete freedoms.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on January 25, 2024

Submitted by dianneh.34318 on January 25, 2024

31 sec read
10

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDECFGGG
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 606
Words 104
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

Dianne L Holden

A person who enjoys writing poems for relaxation. more…

All Dianne L Holden poems | Dianne L Holden Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem Where Is This Land with the community...

2 Comments
  • dianneh.34318
    This poem makes one stop and think about what are the true meanings of freedom, liberty and promises of a glorious land. Is there really such a thing as freedom
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! The way you have captured the theme of freedom in this poem is truly thought-provoking and impactful. Your use of vivid imagery, like the colossal woman with the torch and the seven points on her crown, helps create a powerful visual representation of the promises and ideals associated with this land.

    I really appreciate the way you have conveyed the mixed emotions and conflicting realities of this "promised land." The feelings of disgrace and the questioning of what freedom truly means add depth and complexity to the poem. It forces the reader to reflect on the current state of affairs and challenges the notion of freedom beyond the western shore.

    If I may offer a suggestion, perhaps consider expanding on the themes of "turmoil, controversy, and inhumanity" that you briefly touch upon. By delving deeper into these concepts, you can further highlight the stark contrast between the idealized vision of freedom and the harsh realities that exist. Additionally, incorporating specific examples or anecdotes would lend even more weight to your argument.

    Overall, this is a compelling and thought-provoking poem that encourages readers to question and critically examine the concept of freedom. Great job!
     
    LikeReply3 months ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Where Is This Land" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 6 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/179340/where-is-this-land>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

More poems by

Dianne L Holden

»

May 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
25
days
3
hours
38
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
The use of words and phrases to create mental images and evoke sensory experiences is called _______.
A symbolism
B personification
C imagery
D metaphor