Intensity causes havoc



It is you who caused this havoc in my heart,
And all this chaos in my body.
I looked at you like some masterpiece art,
Yet you bit me through your canvas, when I was screaming: PLEASE STOP!
A dress i am which was badly damaged,
A dress beggars would only afford.
All the damage—The result of all loose threads
I might be mangled yet beware, I'm still not dead.

It is you, how I'm lost in my intensities and no way out.
The pain, the agony; under my chest—
The tense hatred of my phone I carved,
The need of someone to save me, with teared eyes.
Tears? "No i can't shed any"
That's how i thought, yet you proved me wrong.
Got No cash neither am in debt with any,
Didn't know I'd get hurt, from you especially.

About this poem

This poem is about someone you adore hurting you badly and being truly unkind.

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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by Emile on January 24, 2024

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Scheme ABAXXXXX XXXXBXBB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 724
Words 153
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 8

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