Asteroides



Sentada en una nube,
viendo como este barco se hunde.
Con esta sien que trasciende.
Con una nobleza que no me corresponde.
Mi corazon no me entiende,
a mi cabeza no le sorprende.
Porque esta se ha fijado en endes.
Palabras que invaden esta hoja, como asteroides.
Con libros me responde pero con palabras me comprende.
Con reputacion que me respalde.
Naves con las que me translade.
Pero que pretendes?
Solo quiero que mi angel me recuerde.
En este universo lleno de desdendes.
Un aliento que sin querer descuide.
Una anatomia que defraude.
Por que te defiendes?
No lo voy a negar, esta rosa me confunde.
Se va, y nunca me responde.
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Submitted by ilusiones on January 19, 2024

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Scheme ABBBBBCCBBBCBCBBCBB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 632
Words 130
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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