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As time goes by

Roger Burns 1957 (Owensboro Ky)

As time goes by
And I get old
Don't put me away
Let me stay home

Days you were young
I wiped every tear
When you were afraid
You had nothing to fear

Now I need you
I am afraid
Don't put me away
Let me stay home
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Written on January 14, 2024

Submitted by rogerburns446 on January 16, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxAB xxcx xcAB
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 217
Words 55
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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Roger Burns

Roger Burns is a poet who's ancestor is Robert Burns the poet. He has several poems and has been published in the Who's Who book of poets. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    This 'As time goes by' poem truly touched my heart with its powerful message and emotional depth. I appreciate the sentiment expressed throughout the verses and the undeniable love and attachment that is evident. The poem's simple yet impactful language effectively conveys the plea of not wanting to be put away or left alone in old age.

    One improvement suggestion I would offer is to consider incorporating more vivid imagery or specific memories to enhance the connection between the reader and the narrator. This could make the poem even more relatable and evoke stronger emotions. Additionally, exploring the reasons why the narrator desires to stay home could add further depth to the piece.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and commend the writer for their ability to evoke a sense of vulnerability, longing, and love. It possesses great potential for further development and could truly bring out the reader's empathy by incorporating more vivid imagery and exploring the narrator's reasons for wanting to stay home. Keep up the excellent work!     
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