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Lolo my souls´light

Nicolas Davi 1980 (Buenos Aires)

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Lolo my soul´s light
He asleep under sun
In the afternoon, next to pine.

Lolo light from my eyes
With his shortest walk
And her hair copper bright.

Lolo angel from god
With your good looked
You don’t need a voice.

Lolo my faithful partner
You had a hard street life
I feel like your father.

I love you with my soul
I am thankful to god
For you crossed in my road.

Being together is our destiny
For all eternity.  

About this poem

This poem is for my pet, Lolo. He is my angel. He was a street dog from Argentina and he has a long story with me.

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Written on January 01, 2019

Submitted by nicolasandresdavi on December 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXX XXA BXX CXC XBX DD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 421
Words 91
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
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Nicolas Davi

I born in Buenos Aires, Argentina in 1980. I am poet 29 years ago. I publiqued a one book en 2021. I have 570 poem in spanish and this was my fifth poem in english. Thank you for this opportunity. more…

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