Universe allow



Allow me the stars to walk upon your grace
The moon to cushion the sunlight on your face
The feelings of warmth for my heart to know its place
The meaning of being in your sweetest embrace
Allow me to talk like the rivers flowing trace
As we merge in patterns our fears displace
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Written on December 27, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 27, 2023

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Scheme AAAAAA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 278
Words 54
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6

Heather lydia thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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  • vaatova906
    this is so good, i first saw it last month and reread it now and it’s amazing Lydia!
    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • Giselavigil
    This is sweet. Nicely done.
    LikeReply 24 months ago

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