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YOU AND ME

Mark Schroettner

When I look at you
You intoxicate my senses
When I'm talking to you
I become tongue-tied as everything inside tenses
When I'm day-dreaming of you
I see you being with me
When I'm living each day without you
Only wish that it can be you with me.

About this poem

This was written 01/08/1998. This was published in the anthology The Glistening Stars and Copyright 1998 by The International Library of Poetry. Copyright 2023 by sweetslimited.

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Written on January 08, 1998

Submitted by markanthonyschroettner on December 24, 2023

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Scheme ABABACAC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 244
Words 48
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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