A sucker for the pool



Today I went swimming ,
Deep inside my feelings .
Felt good until it started to swing .
How would a pool swing ? Why would you?

It is what it was until you realize what it is .

Who knows ?
We didn’t get no manual…
Then how did we know?
That man is an animal?

Finally made it out the pool ,
I looked back and the pool wasn’t cool.
So I took a turn but I kept going round and round .
Until I fell back in the pool.

I tried to escape but I didn’t know where to go,
I didn’t understand the compass so how would I know ?
Who to tell? Who to blame?

Or do I enjoy swimming in this pool?

Boygod .

About this poem

I used to be a sucker for pain . “The pool” refers to pain . This particular poem appears to explore themes of self-reflection, uncertainty, and questioning one’s surroundings and circumstances.

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Written on November 08, 2022

Submitted by Boygodmoments on November 05, 2023

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Scheme AXAX X XBCB DDXD CCX D
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 606
Words 142
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 1, 4, 4, 3, 1

Akhaze Godwin (BoyGod)

Akhaze Godwin, known by the moniker BoyGod, is a poet with a profound commitment to promoting mental health awareness and self-discovery. Throughout the journey of my life, poetry has served as a therapeutic refuge—a means to cope and heal. My poetic voyage commenced in 2012 when I was merely 14 years old. The pages of my life bore the weight of low self-esteem, and in 2017, the shadows of depression led me to step away from Covenant University. However, resilience pushed me forward, and in January 2019, I resumed my academic journey at Olabisi Onabanjo University, culminating in my graduation in 2023. Every verse I craft represents a therapeutic escape, a way to navigate the intricate passages of life, and a medium to express what often remains unspoken. My poetry has been my companion through various stages, allowing me to find solace and to release the emotions that words alone cannot convey... Instagram @boygodbaby more…

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