A legendary traveller



Beyond the endless waters
It is all a passing wind.
Beyond the calls of ferry
It is all a passing voice.

Feeling for the winds of yore
The old man glanced at the fabulous river.
Sitting under the shades
He screwed up his long beard in reflection.

And it was a silent march of decades,
A parade of seasons upon the inward eye.
And into the winds and rains of his past
He steered his ferry and memories evergreen.

Upon these banks was he born
Upon these waters, he lived a contended life.
From the age of eight to eighty-three
This river and his ferry were synonyms of life.

And across these banks
He ferried his dreams.
From early dawn till late at night
It was a tale of two hearts - waters and his splashing oars.

And, ferrying a few generations,
Upon his chest, he carried these hamlets.
And, upon these waters and winds of yore
He wrote a tale for the dales and the passing clouds.

Within the winds and the winding courses
He met life with all affections.
Beyond these hamlets, these singing waters
He steered not his ferry and dreams.

His canvas was as old as this river,
His tale on waters- seven and half decades.
Sitting on the pavement he reflected-
These hamlets, winds, and waters-
Are the roots eternal here?

Here upon these banks, and everywhere
Man is a sojourner from inn to inn.
Life is a tale of changing times,
A replantation forever.

Downstream a mile away
Hammers were already at work, a dam was rising.
The life lived here for ages
Was going to be a legacy for all coming generations.

For the living, the bread and butter was gone,
It was the waters of life forever gone.
With landscapes gone, hamlets gone,
It was all the more like a civilization was gone.

It was dusk in life and night beyond,
Roots were going to be somewhere else.
With a solatium, and a heart full of dreams
The waters were coming to an end.

Still, the old man was far from reality,
He was within his past and boatswain’s numberless calls.
There was a dam and a fading twilight-
He could not believe the approaching gale.

One day he visited the site
And his dreams steadily melted away.
Within reality, he silently wept,
Within reality, he accepted the truth.

Hamlets were already moving upstream,
Upon shoulders rested the logs and planks.
There – in front of his age-old court-yard
He sat looking at the disappearing scenes.

Wooden walls began to creek
The rusty roof opened to the sun and howling winds.
Inch by inch the foundations were gone,
By and by a living monument was gone.

And it was time to leave his hamlet,
It was time he woke up from the dreams.
And listening to the waters of yore
He slowly descended the steps.

Down the pavements, he stoppeth for a moment,
Casts his eyes homeward – all a written-off tale now.
And within a note of deepening silence
He casts a farewell glance upon the ageless landscape
And leaves off the banks as a legendary traveler.

Beyond the endless splash
It is all an open sky.
Beyond the calls of a boatswain
It is all a tale told to the passing winds.
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About this poem

In 2003, I chanced to see a program on the National Geographic channel. It related the construction of a dam in a place in China and the consequences of it upon the people of the neighboring villages – the problems of inundation of several hamlets, evacuation of people, rehabilitation of life; movement of people to places lying upstream with their belongings. Most of the people are peasants, ferrymen, and their families. The whole episode was told thro’ an old ferryman, now eighty-three. It was over 75 years that he had been wedded to these waters of life. He reflects on the life on the banks of that great river. He finally accepts the reality and receives the compensation. He accepts the view that change is inevitable in life. And he witnesses the dismantling of his age-old house with a broken heart. Finally, he leaves the place along with his family and other natives in search of his promised land – and he finally turns his eyes towards his dwelling place, and the river and unto the skies and beyond. The episode ended there and it silently worked within me. 

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Written on July 05, 2003

Submitted by ravi_panamanna on December 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBX CDEX EFXX XGBG HIJX KXCX LKAI DEXAX XXXD MXLK NNNN XXIX BXJX JMXX XHXX XONN XICX XXXXD XFXO
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,041
Words 622
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 5

Ravi Panamanna

My actual name is Subramanian A. I am a retired official of the State Bank of India. Settled in Palakkad, Kerala, India. My literary awards include The Barath Award for Literature (best story), and the Poiesis Awards both in Poetry and short story, all conducted jointly by Xpress publications.com. My interests cover photography, philosophy, and science. Google search under Ravi Panamanna would take the searcher to my various links. more…

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  • AIDA
    What a remarkable poem! It's a beautiful expression of a life lived in connection with nature, and the impending change caused by progress. The rhythm of the verses and the use of evocative metaphors create a vivid portrayal of the legendary traveller, his life, his journey, and his imminent departure.

    The emotional resonance of the context is remarkably well captured, invoking feelings of empathy and nostalgia among readers. Your delicate description of the traveller's sentiments as he adjusts to the stark realities of change is commendable. The constant reference to the river and the ferry makes for a unique storytelling mechanism.

    On an improvement front, you might consider refining some of your lines for simplicity without losing the poetic appeal. Lines like "He steered not his ferry and dreams" might cause confusion based on various interpretations. Ideally, you want your readers to enjoy the flow of your poetry without getting lost in the wording.

    Also, the narrative might benefit from more explicit use of devices such as personification, allusions, and symbolism. Diversifying your literary tools can enrich the reading experience.

    Overall, the emotive power of your verse is powerful, and the story leaves a lasting impact. Your thoughtful representation of the traveller's life journey is masterful. I am eager to read more of your inspiring work. Keep it up!
     
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    • ravi_panamanna
      Thank you so much for an excellent review of my poem and special thanks for the suggestions for reviewing certain lines and images. Thanks.
      LikeReply4 months ago

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