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Blue days

Verey Ayat 2004

Lyric
I'm not gonna reach you,
I've already tried
You're somewhere so high
While im here, counting days
For the date it will be gone-
This endless season calling sorrow
Exhausted soul of mine no longer
Tries to fight unequal battle.
I lnew it was coming
Your blue days are over.
The one meant to fly should not waste their time
Cus you're free, you're alive-so dont miss it
love you, goodbye.

About this poem

Poem is written from a deppresed partner perspective. Lyrical character feels like they have to let THEM go for their own safety.

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Written on August 17, 2023

Submitted by vaatova906 on December 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIGJKC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 386
Words 74
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
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