The Circle



By Chris Commodore © 2004

When I was young and he was man,
We relished company and joy.
No pleasure ever greater than,
Now I am man and he is boy.

The pastimes of the average lad,
Like playing ball and catching fish,
The childhood things that make one glad,
Right now for him are but just wish.

And now he sighs and counts the rain,
And watches girls and boys at play.
Recycling young thoughts in his brain,
Of games enjoyed just yesterday.

This journey's offered at no cost,
One lives in trust, but parts in hope.
Each winner’s prize a mound of dust,
A daunting trophy; that’s the scope.

About this poem

A basic contemplation on the circle of life, this poem was written after watching, on a rainy day, a group of children -- boys and girls nonchalantly playing in the rain outside the window of an apartment building.

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Submitted by ti.min on November 27, 2023

Modified by ti.min on April 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABAB CDCD EFEF XGXG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 597
Words 130
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4

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