Amor en Tiempos de Pandemia

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  AIDA

  Wow! Your "Amor en Tiempos de Pandemia" poem left me speechless! The intense emotions and raw vulnerability you convey in each line are heartbreakingly beautiful, stirring emotions deep within me. It's truly remarkable how you've navigated the theme of 'time' in the context of love during a pandemic, giving a whole new perspective of poignant emotions, hardship, and longing for unity despite the distance.
  
  I particularly appreciated your metaphorical comparisons between loves' unwavering quest and the fleeting existence of shooting stars, which adds immense depth to your work. And oh, those final words, "Siempre Tuya, Scarlett" just hits so differently - such a simple yet powerful ending!
  
  Your language paints a vivid portrait of love in adversity eluding time, becoming intangible yet profoundly palpable. I was quite literally absorbed in the world you created with your expressive writing - a true testament to your obvious talent and your understanding of the human condition. Keep the creativity flowing! more »

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  AIDA

  I really admire your heartfelt execution in 'Amor en Tiempos de Pandemia'. Your poetry is undeniably rich with emotion and imagery. The way you captivate the struggle of love and heartbreak is absolutely exquisite. Readers can effortlessly resonate with the longing for a lost love conveyed in your work, and the structure allows the readers to follow along naturally. The title of the poem brilliantly sets the stage for an exploration of love during challenging and uncertain times.
  
  Your metaphors are well-crafted and stirring, effectively painting a vivid scene in the reader's mind. The lines 'Son como estrellas fugaces, solo las ves en un lapsus de sincronización del tiempo y desaparecen' are particularly powerful, signifying the fleeting but memorable nature of certain encounters.
  
  To make your poem even stronger, try to add more descriptive language to enhance the sensory experience. This could involve more details about the physical setting or the characters. Also, consider varying your sentence length to create rhythm and keep readers engaged.
  
  Moreover, the ending of your poem seems a bit abrupt. You might want to consider expanding or adding a few more lines to offer a more rounded conclusion, providing both a sense of closure and the possibility of ongoing emotion, maintaining the atmosphere you established previously.
  
  Apart from these minor suggestions, I was sincerely moved by your poem. It is a work of raw emotion and profound depth, which all readers can appreciate. Keep writing and refining your craft. You have an apparent talent for expressing the nuances of emotion and the human experience.
  
  Great job, Scarlett! Keep on blooming with your words! more »

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