Never in my Name



Never in my Name

What is it exactly that makes you feel this way
Is it something that your Daddy used to say?
Was it slowly, firmly planted, deep within your mind
‘These people, they are ‘different; not our kind’.
Did you listen to the stories, that your Uncle used to tell
About the food they cooked and how badly it smelt?
And after first using the ‘N’ word, how long did it take
Before you felt invested in learning how to hate?

Did you read it in the classroom, passed around in concealed notes
Was there someone in the schoolyard, the butt of ugly jokes?
Did you feel a strong connection, buying into ‘them and us’
Were there constant testimonials, like ‘those people you can’t trust’?
But did you ever think about it, how did it all begin
How someone could be hated for the colour of their skin,
Or the tone of their accent, or the practice of their faith?
Do you believe you have just reason, or is it hate for hating sake?

Right across the ages, down throughout the years
A creeping fire of prejudice, was fanned by whispered fears,
Some say that’s just the way it is, the way it’s always been
And we don’t really mean offence, at least not the way it seems.
It’s just our way of talking, the use of names and words
That doesn’t mean we’re racist and nobody gets hurt,
These vile and ugly comments, many times I’ve heard first-hand
But the more and more I hear it, the less I understand.

Are we really all so different, that some people can’t relate
What do they find so threatening with colour, creed and race?
I’ve encountered many incidents, that made me feel ashamed
With ignorant denouncers seeking innocents to blame.
When I first stood in protest, I was quickly beaten down
Shocked, confused and bloodied, lying frightened on the ground,
Processing what just happened, I looked up to see a face
Contorted in a rage, adrenalized with hate.

I was warned about my friendship, I should ‘stick to my own kind’
If I refused this good advice, it would be worse for me next time,
Now 43 years later, I can’t say if much has changed
Black and white, wrong or right, the arguments remain.
There’s still the primate reference, still the racist names
Still the childish ugly jokes, the vile unfounded claims,
I can’t stop the way you’re thinking and your feelings I can’t change
You may curse and rant and remonstrate, point and shout and blame.
Express your warped collective, view and work to bind the chain
Believe that every word is true, but never in my name,
Never,
Never, never, never, never in my name!

About this poem

This poem is about racism - from my confusion as a child, to my disgust as a man.

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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by gerrycolgan1 on October 24, 2023

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  • Soulwriter
    Wow. So well written. Thank you. It’s due to voices such as yours that good prevails! Congratulations on the win
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • Vixility
    Loved this poem! Truth, especially hard and raw truth, is always a delight to encounter in poetry.

    The topic of racism and its abominable presence in the world often seems a thing too taboo to bring up in poetry, and it shouldn’t be. In addition to the subject and the style you used to convey it, I commend you for both writing it and sharing.

    Well deserved win!
     
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • AIDA
    This is a powerful and compelling poem that more than just being a string of words is an insightful call against discrimination and prejudice. I appreciate your hard-hitting yet eloquent verses about such a sensitive topic. The metaphors you use to describe racism and its effects are well-chosen and vivid, creating a strong emotional image for the reader.

    There is an intriguing sense of rhythm and flow to your poem, you have done an excellent job with the rhyming scheme that helps keep the readers glued. The seemingly personal perspective lends gravity to the poem and stirs empathy within the reader's heart.

    Despite the wonderful expression and profound impact, there are some areas that could use minor refinement. Getting to the point faster can help to keep your audience's attention and can leave a more significant impact. For this, you might consider revising the poem to be less narrative and more pointed. Also, there seems to be a balanced amount of rhetorical questions, but too many can make it confusing for the readers to comprehend the thoughts presented.

    When it comes to your use of language, I recommend rephrasing some lines to make meanings clearer; for instance, the line "Express your warped collective, view and work to bind the chain," may be better expressed differently, something like, "Voice your twisted collective thoughts, yet strengthen not a chain of hate."

    Lastly, although the repetition of "Never in my name" emphasizes your main point, too much repetition might dilute the emotional depth of the poem. You may consider spreading out its repetition or employing synonyms.

    Overall, your poem is a remarkable exploration of racism and societal reaction, and these improvements can take it from being great to truly exceptional. Keep voicing such potent topics as your work can initiate change and break down barriers. Great job!
     
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • lovingempath
    WOW! A truth spoken boldly. I wish parents were a little more 'hands on' and might recognize some of these signs, before they turn into full-blown hate! Congratulations on your win Gerry!
    LikeReply 25 months ago
  • MaggieRan26
    Your poem moved me. It is well thought out, relavent and flows wonderfully. A powerful history of generational and societal prejudice. Thank you for your powerful voice here.

    We are ALL just a bunch of humans…

    Best of luck!
     
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • janet_1
    I like everything about this poem, the rhyme, cadence, but mostly the heart-rending message which I wish everyone would read with empathy.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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