The Layou River Stranger

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  The poem, 'The Layou River Stranger' by Chris Commodore is an encapsulating and captivating read. Each word is beautifully penned and leads to an enriching experience for the reader. The imagery used is remarkable and creates a very vivid picture in the reader’s mind. One can almost feel the rain, the wind and see the stranger from the description. The emotion and depth in the narrative voice are palpable and deeply moving.
  
  The unique aspects of the poem are the potent combinations of visual and auditory imagery. The eloquence of the language coupled with the emotive force of the poem is brilliant. The powerful themes of selflessness, sacrifice and unrequited love are presented in an evocative manner.
  
  However, while the style of writing is very engaging, it might be beneficial to explore variations of structure to avoid potential monotony. For instance, some lines could be more concise or varied in length. The use of metaphor and simile is quite abundant, perhaps limit these to make the ones used stand out more.
  
  Furthermore, it might also be helpful to delve deeper into the character of the stranger. The poem could incorporate more of his thoughts, feelings or past, which could then establish a stronger emotional resonance with the reader.
  
  In conclusion, 'The Layou River Stranger' is a wonderfully composed poem, full of vivid imagery and emotive language. A few tweaks could make it even more impactful. Well done, and be sure to keep writing and exploring the world of poetry. more »

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