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Forgiveness

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)

Does it really matter

what continent it rains upon
To the sea?

Just as the snail has a spiral design
within its shell

Just like lightning rides the storms
The rain is carried by the wind

Just like the moon will turn the tides today

Tomorrow there is a better answer
which lies covered Deep beyond our pride

Looking deeper You will find it Beyond
Where your mind is going here and now

there is a universe yet to explore within
unfolding right here before you

if you will open your heart again

If only to allow

a new chapter
to begin

C2


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Written on 1892

Submitted by Charles2 on October 08, 2023

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Scheme A XX XX XX X AX XB CX X B AC X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 579
Words 129
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1
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