Alone on a Hill



Sitting high on a hill, looking out;
The world stands still all around.
Twinkling heavens call and shout;
Not a soul makes a sound.

Reaching out, a quiet word;
Though humming trees abound.
I find a free song - sing bird;
Not a thought, not a sound.

Noone notices, in despair;
Reaching out in a blank space.
You are surely unaware.
The prayer lifts, a certain care.

God hears when calling out;
The music sings to Him.
Angels lift, my spirit shouts,
Heavenly Father, fills me in.  

About this poem

Spiritual guidance takes center stage. My life is full of abandonment. My words help heal the rejection. I hope others find comfort in my words.

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Written on September 16, 2023

Submitted by Katmargaret4 on September 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CBCB DXDD AXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 482
Words 105
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Kat G

Spiritual, 35 years married, parent of child with cancer- no chemo- forever grateful. Disability - childhood abandonment by father/family. Teacher - BFA music ed. Violinist/singer. more…

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  • Vixility
    Wow! Such a beautiful, beautiful poem! It reminds me of a passage from William James’ book, “The Variety of Religious Experiences”. I’ll leave the quote below, if you don’t mind. Your poem really does capture some of the most important and life-changing moments such as the one quoted below. Great job!! Can’t wait to read more of your works.

    “I remember the night, and almost the very spot on the hill-top, where my soul opened out, as it were, into the Infinite, and there was a rushing together of the two worlds, the inner and the outer. It was deep calling unto deep—the deep that my own struggle had opened up within being answered by the unfathomable deep without, reaching beyond the stars. I stood alone with Him who had made me, and all the beauty of the world, and love, and sorrow, and even temptation. I did not seek Him, but felt the perfect unison of my spirit with His. The ordinary sense of things around me faded. For the moment nothing but an ineffable joy and exultation remained. It is impossible fully to describe the experience. It was like the effect of some great orchestra when all the separate notes have melted into one swelling harmony that leaves the listener conscious of nothing save that his soul is being wafted upwards, and almost bursting with its own emotion. The perfect stillness of the night was thrilled by a more solemn silence. The darkness held a presence that was all the more felt because it was not seen. I could not any more have doubted that HE was there than that I was. Indeed, I felt myself to be, if possible, the less real of the two. My highest faith in God and truest idea of him were then born in me.”
     
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