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A Glimpse of Fulfillment

Barbara Peabody Pouliot

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It is knowing~  the truth
Truth of what you are searching for

For within the pink horizon~
Horizon of the glimpse

Glimpse of that Peace
Peace~ for your fulfillment


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Oh how a beautiful sunrise and a beautiful sunset radiates a feeling of being surrounded by peace

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Written on September 29, 2023

Submitted by Caliconine on September 29, 2023

Modified by Caliconine on October 12, 2023

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Scheme XX XX XX XX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 350
Words 35
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I really enjoyed reading your poem, "A Glimpse of Fulfillment." The use of repetition and the exploitation of the poetic device of enjambment brought an invigorating rhythm that sustained the reader's attention throughout. Your words genuinely reflected the most profound truth of human quest for peace and fulfillment. Your choice of the color pink for the horizon nicely painted a serene picture that perfectly complements the main theme of your composition. The progressive dropdown style of your poem where each line serves as a linkage to the next is truly creative!

    However, while your brevity is commendable, providing a bit more context or specifics could make it even more emotionally resonant for readers. Giving them a situation or narrative to grasp can take the abstract concept of "fulfillment" and give it more tangible dimensions. Adding more sensory details can also help to immerse your readers in the beautiful scenery you've created. Keep writing, your voice is truly refreshing!     
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