A walk, in soul’s shadow

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



A soul hovers
amidst the universal stream

A leaf floats
downstream upon the river

Spinning in lazy circles
as we, drawn into dreams

Of thoughts we've entertained,
yet never quite attained...

Inclined to become caught
In the eddies of life's flow

as shades of gray
Begin climbing our thoughts

a gathering of souls

Overcast skies,
adrift in rainy daydreams

oh, as the sleepy rise
eyes half closed,

get another blanket,
put another log on the fire

Winter's coming fast  

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Written on 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on September 15, 2023

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Scheme XX XA XB CC XX XX X DB DX XA X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 521
Words 114
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1

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