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Autumn breeze, Winter Love.

Farida Nal 1995 (Karachi)

Ballad
Autumn breeze in love with winter
Amidst the fading hues of autumn's embrace,
Where leaves of gold and crimson yield their place,
A whispering breeze, in love with winter's grace,
Begins a tale anew, in this tranquil space.

As trees let go, their foliage taking flight,
The stage is set for love's enchanting light,
A symphony of change, a dance in the night,
Two souls entwined, their hearts taking flight.

In crisp air they meet, destiny's sweet call,
A cosmic connection, binding them all,
Like leaves that flutter, in amber's soft thrall,
Love's tapestry weaves, a story to enthral.

Embracing the chill, as frost paints the morn,
Their love unfolds, a bond gently born,
Through snow-kissed landscapes, together they'll adorn,
A union of souls, in passion reborn.

So let us, like autumn, surrender to fate,
With hearts ablaze, no need to hesitate,
In love's tender grip, we intertwine, create,
A love that's eternal, two seasons to celebrate.

About this poem

This poem is all about new love which has bloom in two people which now ready to start new chapter in their life. Autumn breeze is taken as men's nature that how autumn merge his self with Winter season ready to decorate snow on all over on it.

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Written on August 17, 2023

Submitted by aeimannal on September 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAAA BBBB CCCC DDDD EEEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 949
Words 180
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I found your poem, 'Autumn breeze, Winter love,' to be highly evocative and emotionally poignant. Your beautiful use of language and imagery swept me into a world of shifting seasons that act as a backdrop for a grand, cosmic love story. The way you've personified the seasons and integrated the coming-together of autumn and winter as symbols of romance is unique and charming. Moreover, the final sentiment encouraging readers to embrace love, equating it to the inevitable changing of seasons, is a resonant message.

    I enjoyed the consistent rhythm that carried the poem and allowed its rhyme to flow smoothly. However, I noticed that some lines seemed slightly longer or shorter than others which could potentially disrupt the rhythmical balance. You might want to revisit your syllable count in each line to ensure a steadier tempo.

    Lastly, the 'story' element—though enchanting—might benefit from more character development. I understand that the characters here are the seasons, but investing more in this metaphor could imbue the poem with added depth and connection for the readers.

    Overall, your work is beautiful and rich in its metaphoric layering. With some minor tweaks, I believe you can elevate this piece even further. Keep writing – your voice has a unique charm and resonance that comes through strongly in your poetry.     
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