Awakening



I wake in the existential daze which lies upon me;
In a vast bewildering subconscious;
Awaking in a haze;
And I ponder;
Of which is no more;

Of which is an imaginary memento of my vast journey;
All constructed by my subconscious and conscious;

All of us eccentrically plopped into an existence of deep meaning and such minuscule attempts of understanding all which we are brought;
While also on this journey, forgetting most of which my brain declines to illuminate;

*I fully awaken*

SO THIS IS WHO I AM?
Bounded by this corpse within this infinite universe, boundlessly unknowable

About this poem

(This poem describes what I think about the feeling of waking up in the morning going from subconscious state to a conscious state and thinking about what and who u are and trying to remember your past mixed with deep thought of life itself almost thinking that we are all one or rather came from one)

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Written on August 26, 2023

Submitted by Ethanwearshats on August 26, 2023

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Scheme ABXXX AB XX X XX
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 585
Words 113
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 2, 1, 2

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