you



thats  where l knew l lost you
the sounds of your voice was disappearing  and
your existence was starting to be unclear
l Started to be un sho about my existence too because l believe we belonged together
l believe we were forever but we were never
our love was always seen as the strongest but it was the weakest
 it was always portrayed as something else but it was just caois
 it was not real
 l believe l could die losing you
 but thats were l felt more alive
 l started to focus on me thats were l saw
 you didn't really deserve me

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toxic relationship

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Written on June 06, 2023

Submitted by asisiphobekaphi4 on July 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDDEFGAHFI
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 544
Words 112
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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