And if we die tomorrow

Olivier Dochez 1976 (Sint-Agatha-Berchem)



My eyes are red
My ribs are cracked

My lips are bruised
My hands are weak

My soul is sleepy
My legs are numb

My lungs ache
With each lonely breath

My poor heart is tired
Yet it keeps on beating

And so I will follow its rhythm
Let it guide me home

About this poem

This is a very personal poem, like so many of mine, it is the first poem I have written since I separated from my partner and lost everything. I was very low and with a death wish, but I also was in huge emotional and physical pain, these lines just came out. I still feel it is a clumsy poem but it shows that we all need to restart at one point, even when we are at our lowest.

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Written on January 08, 2016

Submitted by ColorizedHive on July 31, 2023

Modified by ColorizedHive on July 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX XA XX XX AX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 251
Words 58
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

Olivier Dochez

Olivier published his first poem in 1994, but after the backlash of his family for this and for the fact he is on the LGBTQ+ spectrum he lost his passion and romance and allowed himself to get into a mentally abusive relationship. during 15 years his romance and his passions were beaten out of him by parents and partner and he ended up trying to commit suicide on several occasions. since 2016 he has found his passion again, fist by mourning the end of the abusive relationship and realising he still loved his partner, but only in the shape from before they married, and he needed to rebuilt his life from the ground at age 40. Now at 47 he is finally starting to live again and is ready to share his poetry. Olivier is educated in graphic arts and decorative techniques. He was refused to attend university by his parents and got influenced to drop his promising career in interior designing for a job as a clerk. he has worked 25 years in customer services until it nearly killed him in the end. He was the owner of Two Guys from Brussels, a café safe house in Bangor, Gwynedd and invented the 'Praline coffee' and the 'Gardiners delight' iced chamomile tea. His favourite coffee is a Honey and Spice Cappuccino. more…

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