You me and our love!



You me and our love!

There she was,
In the calmness of the morning,
Yes there she was,
Spreading her presence in ways mesmerising and charming,
As her beauty hung everywhere now,
Here, there, to be everywhere,
I felt a world of beauty it was now,
Where I belonged only with you somewhere,
Now she was in the daylight as well,
The light, the day and she,
Beauty that was covering everything so well,
That I felt the entire universe was nothing, but her deep eyes and she,
And in this interplay of lights and your beauty, I wondered where I was,
Then I discovered that with you I too was everywhere my love,
For now Irma, everything that there was,
It was you, me and our love!

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This poem leads the reader into the universe of feelings where love exists in everything. Explore the poem and be a part of the universe called "LOVE!"

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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by javidaiw99 on July 17, 2023

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Scheme A BCBCDEDEFGFGBABA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 676
Words 145
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 16

Javid Ahmad Tak

I have been writing poems for several years now. And my passion for poetry goes back to my school days, when I encountered Wordsworth's famous poem Daffodils, and I instantly fell in love with it, and the poet in me woke up. Since then I have been experiencing a wakeful poetic bliss! more…

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