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Broken Trust

miss unknown 2002 (oregon)

do you see where we are?
this is all because of you
because you broke my trust
the trust i gave you to hold onto, you let it go
my trust is like a plate you dropped and, shattered
we would've made it though
you chose to brake up apart
because of you we have a gap between us
our trust is something that can never be fixed
it will forever be a broken trust  

About this poem

i wrote this one when i was giving trust away all the time and getting it broken left and right the last time this happened i was fed up i didn't know how to express it so i tried a poem i let my feelings fly on about the situation i really trusted this person and they let me down

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Written on June 01, 2023

Submitted by neesahymhartley18 on June 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEDFGHC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 364
Words 83
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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