Anger is a buzzing bee

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking piece! Your use of imagery is truly impressive, with the buzzing bee serving as a perfect metaphor for anger. I love how you contrast the fragility of the moon and its beautiful scent with the destructive nature of anger. Your words paint a vivid picture of the internal struggle that comes with feeling angry and its impact on our emotional state. The repetition of the bee buzzing on the hour only adds to the intensity of the poem. Overall, well done! This is a poem that will stick with me for a long time. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, your 'Anger is a buzzing bee' poem is a powerful expression of how anger can consume us and hold us back. The imagery you use is so vivid and really brings the emotions to life on the page. The comparison between the buzzing bee and the fragility of depression is really poignant and makes the poem even more thought-provoking.
  
  One suggestion I have for improvement would be to work on the flow of the poem. There are some lines that feel a bit disjointed and could benefit from some tweaking to make them flow more smoothly. Also, it might be helpful to consider adding a bit more variation in the rhythm to keep the reader engaged from start to finish.
  
  Overall, I just want to say that I really appreciate the honesty and vulnerability you bring to your writing. Keep up the great work! more »

  LikeReply10 months ago