I just wanna be your son



I just wanna be your son forever
Please father that is what I wish
For me
Can you give me my wish
I know father it was you that
Made me many years ago
And you placed me here on earth
To live
And I must say father
That I feel that I had been blessed
By you while I live here on earth
And I am very proud
To have a father
Like you
That had
Thought me some manners
Because my father I know
That is also very important to have
Some manners
I can’t live without manners
Also Father
I am happy that I am
Your oldest child
Yes you also made
Some of you young
Children with your holy hands
And you younger children
Are my brothers
Also you younger children
Are very proud of me
I must say that we just get along
Fine with each other
During the day
We work in our father’s vegetable garden
Collecting the vegetable
For God’s servant to cook
We wake up early every morning
Then we go into the shower
And we have our shower in the morning
When we finish the shower
We dry our body with the bath towel
Then we get dressed into our casual clothes
Also many years ago my father thought
Us to pray
And we pray for him
Then we had prayed for the countries that
Are in war

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Written on June 11, 2023

Submitted by aldo_kraas on June 11, 2023

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