Haiku Ah-choo



My nose is dripping,
Both of my eyes are itching.
Flowers are blooming!

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A humorous, lovely haiku about spring and its less lovely side effects.

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Written on May 04, 2023

Submitted by saraha.63834 on May 04, 2023

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Scheme AAA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 71
Words 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3

Sarah Anderson

I am a caffeine addicted mother of a perfect 10 month old son and a wife to the best husband ever! I enjoy the outdoors, reading, and painting! more…

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  • Jewoo525
    A breath of fresh air during the June contest. Although it is risky to submit such a short-form poem to the contest, I think this was worth the gamble because the poet clearly understands that a Haiku isn't just about trying to make a poem with a form that limits syllable count. A humble, yet very fun entry. 
    LikeReply10 months ago
  • filiphosna
    In a sea of edge and theatricality, this is lovely.
    LikeReply10 months ago

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