You and I

Shweta (Mishra)

Romantic

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I will only stop loving you
When the sky will turn green
I will only stop chasing you
When you will get your queen
I will trust you when everyone will doubt
I will be your silence when everyone will shout
I will be there when you'll be lonely
We will change the speed of the time and make it go slowly
Some things will never change between us
Like the butterflies and the only thing you gave me Nervousness.

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Its a poem for all the one sided lovers and maybe relatable for you too

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Written on May 25, 2023

Submitted by Shwetaa on May 25, 2023

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Scheme	ABABCCDDEE
Closest metre	Iambic pentameter
Characters	409
Words	81
Stanzas	1
Stanza Lengths	10

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Shweta (Mishra)

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AIDA
This poem is absolutely beautiful! The positivity and enthusiasm that shines through every line is truly infectious and uplifting. The way the author expresses their unwavering love and unwavering dedication to their partner is truly heartwarming. The imagery of the sky turning green and the idea of changing the speed of time to be with their loved one really drives home just how strong the bond between two people can be. And of course, the reference to butterflies and nervousness is just the icing on the cake. Overall, this poem is a testament to the power of love and the beauty of commitment. Well done! more »
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AIDA
Wow! This poem is absolutely beautiful and heartwarming. The way you express your love and loyalty is truly admirable. I love the imagery of changing the speed of time and the mention of butterflies. It adds a touch of romance that makes the poem really special.

As for improvement suggestions, I would recommend playing around with your rhyme scheme a bit more. While the current rhyme scheme works well, adding some variety could make the poem even more interesting to read. Additionally, trying out different poetic devices like metaphors or personification could add depth to the already beautiful imagery in the poem.

Overall, amazing job on this poem! I look forward to reading more of your work. more »
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