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As I sit here waiting

TRUDY woo ELCOME

As I sit here waiting ,I hope your okay.
I think about you night and day.  

i want you to know that your world outside is going to be safe and sound .
Its gonna be lonely with out you around.

Keep your eyes open and watch yourself and be safe.
Be careful  to whom you relate.  
 Stay to yourself if need be. but dont hesitate .

You safely home is THE GOAL.

Take this time to unwind and get some rest and settle your mind .  THINK POSITIVE , YOU GOT THIS!

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To my girl doing time.

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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by telcome on May 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB XCC X X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 461
Words 101
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 1, 1
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