Brightness falls



Βrightness falls on our eyes,
like the bright summer sunsets,
the moon revolves around the earth,
and we are blessed,
you wear a bright summer dress,
you are earthy, positive, tasty,
you unwind,
you are freedom,
you are breath and oblivion,
and you stroll down the pathways of the heart
and you rise and you fall like the temperature,
healing,
and I come to you and and I am kneeling,
I have sunshine in buckets,
as luck would have it I am released,
you are my girl, my sunlight,
my rest,
my luck,
you are a spoonful of joy
and you are right on the track,
can I wake you with kisses,
and be with you and hold you,
and if you ever fail,
never tell you I told you,
and to move you with song and to savour the moment,
and together to go roaming
and be,
and stay in my heart,
and unfold all your love,
and cling to your warm summer body,
and taste the sand,
and your feet step on mine and you lure me,
into your cave were you cure me,
for what is life without love,
let’s carve out the stars.

About this poem

This is a hyper love poem on all things that make love rich for two lovers; It's a poem on devotion, on nature and on oblivion.

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Written on February 09, 2023

Submitted by Afriendtothemartyr on May 08, 2023

Modified by Afriendtothemartyr on May 08, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 996
Words 228
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35

Spyros Koroniotis

I ‘ve been writing poetry since Ι can remember myself. But poetry I care to share since a couple of years ago. I am a Computer scientist. I have many collections of unpublished poetry. I love writing, meditating, Buddha, Jesus, Bob Dylan. I love almost all English and American poetry, as well as world poetry. Life is love.  more…

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