Living, an exceptional film.



Nothing cloistered.
Not much in the evangelical
But really a healthy dose of conscience
And gritty resolve.
Never too late, yaknow.


He was button down
And by the clock.
Managing tirelessly
A bunch of young bureaucrats.
They could not believe
His stiff, unsmiling
Constancy and presentation.


They made jokes
Smirking behind his back.
Yearning for the dismissal bell
And some pub.


But then a turn of his health
An assessment undeniable.
Probably only six months.
We watch the about-face, softening.
Children who remain aloof.
Some workmates who confirm
A new spark, smile, touch, song.


Finally and without denial
He is gaining from
This Overthrow.
Making amends. Smiling.
Letting go of the doldrums
Of seeming duty. So often pointless.


Living.


And one recreation project
One simple little poor children’s playground
Manfully pushed through
By Mr. Williams
Gave him his final, richest ecstacy.

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Written on April 28, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 28, 2023

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Scheme XABXC CXXXXDC XXXX XAXDXXX AXXDEX XXXEB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 905
Words 171
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 4, 7, 6, 5

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem is truly inspiring! The writer takes us through a journey of the transformation of a man who was once seen as stiff and unapproachable, to someone who has softened and is now embracing life with a newfound vigor. The use of imagery is brilliant, making it easy to not just picture the main character but also feel the emotions he is going through.



    One improvement suggestion would be to consider breaking the poem up into stanzas. This would help to clearly identify when the story is moving from one stage to another and make it easier to read. Overall, this is a beautiful piece that showcases the power of resilience and transformation. Well done!
     
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