A FRESH BREEZE



A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
You ignite endless hope in me,
Your actions and reactions lead me into self discovery,
I have a fresh knowledge poured into my heart ;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
Your presence allows me to remove junk off my chest,
You enlighten me with what birth mental sharpness,
I have a fresh acceptance of who I am;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You understand when I sneeze,
Your advice removes and repels numerous lies off my path,
You encourage me to love what is true and just,
I now hold firm to what awakens genuineness ;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You help me see possibilities,
I march and I overcome  impossibilities,
You have become an architecture of my confidence,
A perfect illustration of the sort of people our world precisely needs;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You direct me into believing in greatness,
I look forward to living life to the fullest,
You daily come with the ingredients which create a recipe for success,
All you are is immeasurable to me;

A fresh brings you bring to me,
You remove bad odour off my life,
I can now differentiate between what is good and bad,
Your participation in my life is observable great,
A powered life is through the great truths generated in it;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You add color into my life story,
In this I know my journey is not a fluke,
You are that phenomenal figure carrying me through,
A tangible confidence builder;

A fresh breeze you bring to me,
You have helped me score success in life,
In the midst of life, you revitalize my going,
Your being here is truly a fresh breeze,
A fresh breeze you bring to me!

About this poem

This poem is about the best that one brings out into another through their participation in their lives.

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Written on March 18, 2023

Submitted by Creativity on March 18, 2023

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Scheme ABaax ABxcx ABxdx Abbxx Acdxa aexxx Aaxxx AexbA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,728
Words 359
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

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