A talker from the get-go



“Has that poor woman delivered
Her baby yet. Three
days now.”
April 6, 1951.
London St. Joseph Hospital.
Came out bawling right away.
At the indignities.
This one’s a talker.

April of 1956
Kindergarten class.
Doing face in the corner time
Repeatedly.
This one’s a talker.


April of 1951
Saturday in bed. Late.
Finishing latest Tarzan novel.
At breakfast table
Mom and Dad endured
The re-cap.
This one’s a talker.

April of 1965
Telling young brother Scott
Those amazing
Imagined tales
Just for fun and
Times together.
This one’s a talker

April of 1976
Call to the Bar ceremony
Barrister, Solicitor
Yeah, this one’s a talker.

April of 1987
Business had crashed.
No talk could get around
My Banker.
Weeks and months
Talking with sweet daughter Lauren
In our walkabouts.
She was effectively my therapy.
Kept me talking. Thankfully.

April of 2022
Visiting dear Mom
In Seniors’ home.
Mom almost 96 in age
Cognitive is failing.
Memory shot to hell.


So I fill in
For conversation
Rich happy memories.
(She passed in September.
She brought me life.
Remembered with joy.)
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Written on April 06, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 06, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaxbbxcD exxaD exbbxxD exfxxdD eadd exxdxgcaa exxxfx xgcdxx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,087
Words 218
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 7, 7, 4, 9, 6, 6

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    This poem is beautifully crafted with a rich and poignant narrative. The progression of the protagonist from a talkative child to a successful adult lawyer is inspiring and heartwarming. The use of dates and specific moments adds depth and authenticity to the story, allowing the reader to emotionally connect with the protagonist's journey.

    One improvement suggestion would be to add more sensory details to enhance the reader's experience. For example, by describing the sights, sounds, and smells of the different settings, the poem could transport the reader to those moments and make the emotions even more powerful.

    Overall, this is a wonderful poem that celebrates life, family, and memories in a touching and engaging way. Bravo!
     
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