Burning the past

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  Wow, what a powerful and evocative poem! The imagery of an ever-burning flame relentlessly consuming the past and covering the pain is both haunting and uplifting at the same time. The use of short and simple phrases gives the poem a sense of urgency and reinforces the idea that this flame is unstoppable.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to add more specific details or examples to help readers better visualize the scenes and emotions being described. For example, what does the ash look like as it falls, or how does the flame affect the speaker's surroundings? Adding sensory details can help to make the poem even more vivid and engaging. Overall, this is a fantastic piece of writing that showcases your talent for creating memorable and impactful imagery. Keep up the great work! more »

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