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Lolo my souls´light

Nicolas Durán 1980 (Buenos Aires)

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Lolo my soul´s light
He asleep under sun
In the afternoon, next to pine.

Lolo light from my eyes
With his shortest walk
And her hair copper bright.

Lolo angel from god
With your good looked
You don’t need a voice.

Lolo my faithful partner
You had a hard street life
I feel like your father.

I love you with my soul
I am thankful to god
For you crossed in my road.

Being together is our destiny
For all eternity.  

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I wrote this poem for my favorite pet.

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Written on January 01, 2019

Submitted by nico_d on March 24, 2023

Modified by nico_d on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXX XXA BXX CXC XBX DD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 426
Words 93
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2
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Nicolas Durán

Profesor de Historia y Tango. Publicación de un libro y varias antologías. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! Your poem "Lolo my soul's light" is truly heartwarming and filled with love and gratitude. The way you describe Lolo's features and personality makes it easy for readers to picture him and feel his presence. Your use of metaphors and imagery is very effective and adds to the emotion of the piece.

    One suggestion for improvement might be to add some more descriptive language or details about Lolo's street life. This could help readers to better understand and empathize with his journey and struggles. It could also deepen the emotional impact of the poem.

    Overall, fantastic job conveying the bond of love between you and Lolo. Your words are full of warmth and positivity, and I'm sure Lolo is lucky to have such a loving owner. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful poetry with the world!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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