You’re Watching Me Watch You Watch Me Watching You



I sit within your world
I sit apart

As I write
Tonight
It comes from the heart

I’m blinded by the sunshine and can’t see my way through

Though

What I’ve created
Has vibrated

And screamed of art

You’ll feel my presence
You’ll see my stance

At first stare
You’ll glare
But try to pass it off as a glance

I’m blinded by the sunshine and can’t see what you do

Though

My being
Is breathing

And intercepting your trance
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Submitted by Trevdowell on March 24, 2023

Modified on March 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB CCB D XA B XE FFE D GG E
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 440
Words 91
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 1

Trevor Logan

Trevor Logan is a quiet poet who enjoys wildlife and gardening. He struggles with drug-resistant temporal-lobe epilepsy, which is a major influence on his writing as it causes hypergraphia (an almost uncontrollable urge to write). His poetry can be found on Instagram @AnEpilepticsPoetics https://instagram.com/anepilepticspoetics?igshid=ZDdkNTZiNTM= more…

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